2015年11月19日雅思大作文范文

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2015年11月19日雅思大作文写作范文

　　A类范文文章结构：5段

　　首段：导入话题，改写题目，表达立场。

　　主体段1：团队运动为孩子创造了合作的机会和环境。

　　主体段2：团队运动能鼓励孩子遵守团队纪律，互相欣赏。

　　主体段3：团队运动可能会削弱合作，而且很多其他活动也能提高合作精神。

　　结尾段：总结上文，重申立场。

　　Sample Answer:

　　Cooperation has strongly been advocated by many schools, possibly because good teamwork spirit is regarded as a shared trait among successful groups. It is believed that organizing children to do team sports is the best way to teach cooperation. My view is that team sports are of great significance to the cultivation of teamwork spirit, despite the fact that children can learn to cooperate through many other methods.

　　Team sports are known for the ability that it can improve children’s teamwork spirit. In the team environment, members need to know how to communicate with each other and discuss strategies to beat rivals, which can prepare students for both academic performance and career development. If there are no team activities provided for children, they may feel lonely and isolated from the outside world. Undoubtedly, introducing more team sports to children contributes to cultivate their cooperation spirit.

　　Another advantage of team sports is that it can encourage children to obey team rules. When they are playing together, they have to follow some certain instructions; otherwise activities or games may not be went smoothly.In addition, children are more likely to help each other and realise the merits of others if they are occupied with team sports.

　　Meanwhile, it should be admitted that team sports are not the only way to cooperation. If the team fails, children may blame their teammates, which is harmful to both teamwork spirit and their friendship. Clearly, there are many other social activities that can improve children’s cooperation, including singing in a chorus and participating in unpaid community service.

　　To sum up, team sports provide a good environment for children to cooperate and encourage them to follow instructions, although we have to acknowledge that some other activities are also the methods leading to teamwork spirit.

　　(Word account: 296)

　　B类范文文章(提纲)

　　结构：5段

　　首段：导入话题，改写题目，简述主体。

　　原因段1：一些国家在大力发展经济的同时忽视了节约能源的重要性。

　　原因段2：生活水平的提高，人们越来越多地依赖私家车，这会导致能源消耗上升。

　　措施段：提高节能意识和发展公共交通能够有效降低能源的消耗。。

　　结尾段：总结上文(概括原因和措施)。

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