【2014.5.22】雅思大作文练习

山姆大叔

今天的雅思作文作业：


抄写以下范文，并补充写完范文当中缺失的段落（下划线部分）


Some people hold that parents should spend more time with their children. Do you agree or disagree?


In China, both of the parents have their jobs. With the development of economy, people tend to pursue high quality living conditions. Most of the parents try their best to offer their children comfortable circumstances, but they seldom have time to stay with their children. In my point of view, no matter how busy they are, they should make the best use of their time to stay with their children.  


First, the love between children and adults will be improved by spending more time on their children. （补充举例部分。可以编数据，也可以编案例。例如：美国从小学开始，暑期都有夏令营，目的就是让家长和小孩能在这里互相陪伴完成任务，增进感情。 ）


Second, children need the direction from their parents. （补充举例部分。可以编数据，也可以编案例。例如：小孩的兴趣爱好、行为规范需要家长指导，以英国为例，音乐家的家庭出来的小孩基本都会走上音乐的爱好，教师家的小孩都很有礼貌等等。 ）


Here I do not deny that there are some disadvantages in spending too much time on children. Some parents restrict their children, and give them little freedom to develop their interests. Therefore, I emphasize that parents should educate and instruct their children appropriately in their spare time apart from their busy works.