【2014.7.22】雅思大作文练习

山姆大叔

It is said that work is the most important thing of people's life. Without the success of career, life will become meaningless .To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?

山姆大叔

tyrone 发表于 2014-7-22 23:19

从这篇来看，造句的底子还是不错的，结构上比较松散，像散文了。明天上午我们讲一讲结构，应该作文提分会比较快。