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[托福独立作文] 动动笔-Lau

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发表于 2014-1-4 11:24:03 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
Do   you agree or  disagree  with  thefollowing  statement? Playing  sports  teaches people more   lessons  about the  life.






As the pace of life has become faster and faster, many employees merely concentrate on their office work even in their spare time, ignoring playing sports. Although it seems most workers do not possess enough time for sprots, I subscribe to the notion that doing sports will provide people with more lessons about life.

First and foremost, people are able to learn about the spirit of transcendence from sports. Dating back to 2004 Olympic Games, we still remembered the inspiring story of the Chinese athlete Liu Xiang. In the past decades, running was universally considered as the kind of sports that Asians, especially Chinese would never be good at. With Asian people's nature and pressure, audience nearly pay any attention to Liu and would like to enjoy the game played by Black people. However, with hard and scientific training acting as the foundation, Liu built up his confidence and did his endeavor to transcend the mental block from common sense. Ultimately, he ran fastest, achieving 12.91s as a record. Specially, Chinese people were greatly impressed by the unbelievable and miraculous transcendence performed by Liu, which became an significant lesson in their life.

Furthermore, it is the lesson of cooperation that the sports teach the team members. Associated with a plant, while nutrient and water in the soil are just like the prize of a sports competition, the roots of the plant resemble the team players. In order to absorb as much nutrient as possible, every branch of the roots is required to grow in different directions. Under this circumstance, every branch is able to obtain the exact nutrient in their tiny area without having to interfere with the process of other branches. Otherwise, they may compete in one tiny area, leaving other nutritious places undeveloped, which remarkably decreases the efficiency. Smilarly, to fight for the best prize, members in one team are supposed to perform their best in respective aspects, which is the approach of collaboration. And the skills of cooperation and how to put them into practice are what the sports teach them.

Last but not least, people tend to realize the importance of keeping fit from doing sports. According to a recent survey conducted by Peking University, approximately 71.6% of the citizens feel that they desire a healthier life from playing sports. Some interviewees believe they feel less exhausted due to frequent sports, and they even know scientific ways of doing sports. Therefore, individuals learn to cherish healthy life style by doing sports.


In conclusion, it is the sports that offer people the spirit of transcendence, the truth of cooperation and a healthier life. As a consequence, sports certainly bring inspiration for people about life.


沙发
发表于 2014-1-4 13:22:26 | 只看该作者
写得略跑题了,注意观察题干,有more这个词,你就要在小论点当中表现一下比较级,体现出更怎么怎么样
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板凳
发表于 2014-1-4 13:44:09 | 只看该作者
单词和句型是要背的,你可以提前先准备背单词看语法,太简单的拿不到高分哦
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地板
发表于 2014-1-18 16:18:58 | 只看该作者
求沙发
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发表于 2014-1-22 10:27:37 | 只看该作者
本楼出租,有意请私密我
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发表于 2014-1-27 02:02:01 | 只看该作者
支持一下:lol
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