托福写作对比类题目的差异化

卡米尔 · 发表于 2016-5-30 17:44:31

　　对比类题目中有一个特点，就是有“than”这个关键词作为提醒。Than的前后有对比的对象，而对比的角度或者说是条件则是呈现“比较级的词汇”。例如：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The car (automobile) has had greater effects on the society than the airplane has done.在这道题目中，我们首先看到“than”这个比较级的标志词，然后定位对比对象“car”和“airplane”，然后是对比的角度” effects on the society”。从而确定这个题目的中心思想是“汽车和飞机对社会影响力的对比”。

　　那么针对对比的双方，它们之间一定存在着相同点和差一点，这样才有比较的价值。首先就相同点而言，两者都是交通工具;而就不同点而言，两者在速度、方便度、实用度、价格等方便都不相同。因此，在真正论述文章的时候，不同点就成了论述的核心内容。

　　首先，确定观点

　　选择赞同题目的角度：汽车比飞机对社会的影响力更大。

　　注意：选择观点的时候要以自身储备的论点为准，选择比较容易论述的方面。

　　其次，找出两者的差异化

　　1、汽车在现代社会大受欢迎，人们使用率更高;(飞机适用于长途或者是跨国使用)

　　2、汽车是最方便的交通工具;(飞机还需要买票，要有好的天气条件)

　　3、汽车的缺点也不容忽视，例如：造成了交通压力。

　　在差异化比较的时候，考生可能找不到3条及以上的分论点内容，那么在第三条的时候，可以采用让步的方式来论述。

　　最后，根据两者的差异化内容，展开讨论

　　差异化论点1：Firstly, the automobile is gaining in popularity in contemporary society .Compared with those in the past. People now ware financially better off, thus automobile is not an unreachable dream for them .To the contrary, a growing number of automobile is becoming the first choice for going out. 汽车在现代社会大受欢迎，人们使用率更高。

　　差异化论点2：Secondly, the most convenient means of transport are cars .One reason to think so is that people are much more mobile with a car and they can go on a journey anytime they want, which seems like a distant thing in previous eras Instead of being annoyed by the flight delays, you can start off on your journey regardless of. 汽车是最方便的交通工具。

　　让步段：Lastly, the negative impact of the automobile should never be ignored. Obviously, with more people owning private cars, traffic jam is becoming a major concern for citizens. Especially for those who live in metropolises. Every day they are living under to the environment and the air pollution caused by it is getting worse. Even parking presents a greater challenge to car owners.汽车的缺点也不容忽视，例如：造成了交通压力。