2015年11月21日托福写作范文

大山

Independent Writing:
　　独立写作题目
　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The most important thing people learned is from families. 2013.5.31NA
　　范文赏析
　　The advent and proliferation of personal computers, the widespread adoption of cell-phones, and the invention of the internet—not to mention the great abundance of literature of child-rearing— have all had a visible impact on how parents interact with their children. From my perspective, the influence of families becomes less.
　　While admittedly we spend the major of our early years with our families and are heavily influenced by them, we eventually leave the nest and are more affected by our peers and our community. When we were younger, our parents and other relatives are the ones that we spent the majority of our time with. Hence due to both our genetic predisposition and our social interactions, we share a lot of the same values and tastes as our relatives. We learn how to face the world and deal with various situations. Many say that we inherit our temper from our parents. It’s easy to see why when we were around them so much.
　　But as we grow older, we begin to shift our time away from family and more towards our peers. Teenagers, especially, develop a stronger bond with people of their same age and begin to emotionally distance themselves from their parents. Such is the inevitable result of adolescence. Children during this period are continuing to learn important life lessons, but they do so often from the activities they engage in with their friends. The successes, the mistakes, the happy and sad times all becomes part of the education for them. A typical child in high school spends nine hours a day with his classmates and then another three if he engages in after school activities or sports. And when children become adults, the time spent with family decrease even more dramatically.
　　Young adults move off to new cities and begin to be actively engaged in their community. Those who have developed a strong sense of self will seek out people of common interests and form bonds with them. This later stage of learning is perhaps the most significant, because it is during this period that we solidify the identities that will last us for a lifetime.
　　In conclusion, although people inherit gene, preference and temper from their families, more impact is from peers and learn from community.

超人不会灰

多谢楼主大力分享，学习了

风雨平生

如此好贴一定要强顶，多谢楼主每天更新！

mary

谢谢楼主的无私奉献！！

瘦光光的小胖胖

谢谢楼主的好东东

Christina_li

谢谢楼主的好东东

植物大战僵尸

谢谢楼主的好东东

Florabutterfly

谢谢楼主的无私奉献！！

皇帝penpen

楼主辛苦了，十分感谢

启程

托福小菜鸟求教，学习了！