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[托福写作] 托福写作范文:自己独住还是和别人分享宿舍

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发表于 2015-9-18 11:36:01 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
在托福写作考试的备考中,除了要对托福写作常考的话题进行分类整理,还需要借鉴一些优秀范文的写作思路和结构,今天给大家带来的托福写作范文是关于自己独住还是和别人分享宿舍的,供大家参考。

  托福写作题目:

  You have been told that dormitory rooms at your university must be shared by two students. Would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room with you, or would you rather choose your own roommate? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer. 在大学里,喜欢自己独住还是和别人分享宿舍?

  Even though the university will choose, it’s not totally a random situation. We all filled out personality questionnaires. The school knows what we’re majoring in, what our interests are, and our study habits and our goals. Besides, if a mistake is made, I can change my room assignment next semester and find a new roommate or a new room.

  分析:

  本段是一个总分的结构。第一句话是主旨,让步地说即使学校帮助我们指派了室友,这样不是完全随机的。本段分为两个部分,第一部分对是有的分配进行了分析,第二部分用besides相隔,告诉了我们即使室友不和谐,也可以换。

  If I did want to choose my own roommate, first I would have to pick some candidates from the list given to me by the university. Then I’d write to them and they’d write back. Through our letters, we’d find out if we have common ground and similar personalities, such as sports or movies. Through my investigation, I’d probably get someone compatible with me. It’s a lot of work to go through so many candidates. Besides, the process of finding similar interests isn’t all that different from what the university does.

  分析:本段是一个总分的结构,是文章的第三段,也就是正文的第二段,写了支持作者立场的第二个分论点。

  But I might choose someone who sounds just like me and still find that the two of us just don’t get along as roommates. I’d rather be with someone who has different interests and likes to do different things, so my roommate could be different from me. This isn’t a problem, but I hope they can be understanding as to our differences. One of the reasons I’m going to the university is to be exposed to a lot of new experiences. So, I’d rather have the university choose my roommate.

  分析:本段是一个总分的结构,是文章的第四段,也就是正文的第三段,写了支持作者立场的第三个分论点。


沙发
发表于 2015-9-18 12:16:09 | 只看该作者
考托了!雄起啊同志们!
板凳
发表于 2015-9-20 19:09:23 | 只看该作者
辛苦了!感谢楼主的无私奉献!
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