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雅思考试写作范文:21世纪的变革机遇

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发表于 2013-3-7 17:15:45 | 只看该作者 |只看大图 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
  雅思考试写作经典范文向来就是广大中国考生备考雅思考试的一个重要材料,因为雅思考试写作经典范围之所以能够获得高分,往往在结构、句型/词汇搭配上都有很多可取之处,下面就是TE工场小编整理的雅思考试写作范文:21世纪的变革机遇。

  Many people are optimistic towards 21st Century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extend do you agree or disagree with their optimism?

  What changes would you like to make in the new century?

  Currently, confronted with the tremendous advancement of the late 20th Century, certain proportion of people hold a positive view towards 21st Century, deeming it a precious chance to change the world positively, which consequently triggered a contentious debate. Attitudes towards this issue are divergent.

  Advocates allege that 21st Century is undoubtedly a peaceful era, which enables to live a harmonious live and generally make some positive changes. Unlike in the yeasty years a century before, wars and conflicts are largely eliminated and economy is the core of this completely new century. Hence, as the divergence of cultures becomes less apparent, it is time that people around the world enhanced cooperation in every sphere, in order to establish the so-call global village. 51ielts.com
  Opponents, nonetheless, cast serious doubts on the proponents’ opinions. As they claims, 21st is absolutely not a no-war-period, rather, it is the very era that allows certain powerful countries to overindulge their boundless ambitions and eventually overwhelm other countries. In this strong-country-dominated age, it is ridiculous to be optimistic and any attempt to make positive changes is naive.

  All in all, both sides have solid foundations. Personally, I tend to side with the former. First and foremost, having witnessed the basically stable situation in the late 20th Century, it is reasonable for us to believe that it is the right time for positive changes. Additionally, in the era of globalization, separate power is not enough for achieving success whereas cooperation equals to successfulness, which has been evidenced in numerous cases. Therefore, it is imperative that some modifications be made in this pivotal moment; otherwise we may miss the hard-won opportunity. As for the changes, I think apart from reinforcing cooperation, division of labor is also of vital importance. For instance, in developed countries, some high-tech industries should be encouraged, whilst in developing countries, it is wiser for developing traditional industries and agriculture.

  以上就是这篇关于21世纪的变革机遇的雅思考试写作范文的全文以,比较符合我们国家目前的国情,同时可以看出这篇雅思考试写作经典范文采用的是分总文章结构,同时长短句的搭配是值得借鉴的,同时一些小词组和词汇都用的很灵活和有深度。


沙发
发表于 2013-3-7 19:06:43 | 只看该作者
急需赚点金币,谢谢楼主!
板凳
发表于 2013-3-23 14:16:59 | 只看该作者
我是个凑数的。。。
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