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In today's society,we are all think highly of efficient.So the issue about whether students will learn much more effectively when their teachers assign projects on which students must work together than when they are asked to work alone which is widely discussed into a point where the contemplation has been arouse.As far as I'm concern,I definitely support the idea that teachers should assign projects which can give a chance to students to finish them together.The following reasons and examples will justify my side.

To start with,the most vital reason is that students can learn more knowledge when finishing assignment as a team.Obviously,they need to talk with others and express their own ideas in  group discussion.They also can gain more from listing to others opinions.To be more specific,most wonderful colleges in the world,like Harvard and Yale,always assign some projects for their students to finish together.Some students may need to analyze the statistic and others may need to write the report.Different students do different types of work,students can concentrate on one thing totally.So the learning will be more effectively.Students have a chance to absorb different kinds of knowledge in different work.It is also a good way to let them know which kind of work is most suitable for them.

Furthermore,another reason is that students can build up friendship through this way.In modern life,we must know that cooperation is significant.When students work together,they may know more about each other.As we all know,Bill Gates is a successful businessman. He set up Microsoft and introduced advanced technology to common people.But when he was in trouble,his team always support him.Just because they have a deep friendship and know each other a lot. With the help of friends,we may be more successful.

Moreover,a few people are convinced that so students do not like work with other people.They may perform better when they finish the work alone.But it is not true.For instance,an investigation carried out by Chinese Academic of Social Sciences last year revealed that more that eighty percent of students would like to attend teamwork.It is no doubt that students are enjoyable when they work together. Apparently,this experience will help them a lot in their future work.Altough  argument may still remain.But time may witness and prove that.

It would therefore no be too great an exaggeration to draw to the conclusion that teacher assign projects on which students must work together is a good thing.Not only students could gain more knowledge but also learn much more efficiently.   

山姆大叔

In today's society,we are all think(还是be动词+动词冲突哦) highly of efficient.So the issue about whether students will learn much more effectively when their teachers assign projects on which students must work together than when they are asked to work alone which is widely discussed into a point where the contemplation has been arouse（不要写这么长的从句，你hold不住，没发现主句的主谓宾不全么？你就写到一个句子里头有两个从句的时候，就可以结束句子重开一句了）.As far as I'm concern,I definitely support the idea that teachers should assign projects which can give a chance to students to finish them together.The following reasons and examples will justify my side.

To start with,the most vital reason is that students can learn more knowledge when finishing assignment as a team.Obviously,they need to talk with others and express their own ideas in  group discussion.They also can gain more from listing to others opinions.To be more specific,most wonderful colleges in the world,like Harvard and Yale,always assign some projects for their students to finish together.Some students may need to analyze the statistic and others may need to write the report.Different students do different types of work,students can concentrate on one thing totally.So the learning will be more effectively.Students have a chance to absorb different kinds of knowledge in different work.It is also a good way to let them know which kind of work is most suitable for them. (这一段的造句不错了，算是可以的)

Furthermore,another reason is that students can build up friendship through this way.In modern life,we must know that cooperation is significant.When students work together,they may know more about each other.As we all know,Bill Gates is a successful businessman. He set up Microsoft and introduced advanced technology to common people.But when he was in trouble,his team always support（三单） him.Just because they have a deep friendship and know each other a lot. With the help of friends,we may be more successful.（这一段写得有点少，你还可以写得再在丰富一些，比如比尔盖茨的好友鲍尔默，和他一样来自哈佛，也追随着他从哈佛退学出来加入微软，这么多年一直都是他的好友和忠实伙伴）

Moreover,a few people are convinced that so students do not like work（动词冲突了，写like working或者like to work比较好） with other people.They may perform better when they finish the work alone.But it is not true.For instance,an investigation carried out by Chinese Academic of Social Sciences last year revealed that more that eighty percent of students would like to attend teamwork.It is no doubt that students are enjoyable（be enjoyable的意思是某个东西很可爱，而不是某人很开心。你可以写students enjoy when they work together，这样是可以的） when they work together. Apparently,this experience will help them a lot in their future work.Altough  argument may still remain.But time may witness and prove that.（这个地方太幼稚了，although和but是冲突的，只能写其中一个，而且中间不是用句号）

It would therefore no be too great an exaggeration to draw to the conclusion that teacher assign projects on which students must work together is a good thing.Not only students could gain more knowledge but also learn much more efficiently.