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In today's society,the world change so quickly.Obviously,it bring a lot of joy to modern people,also,some people feel tired about it.So,the issue about people now are less happy with their lives than people were in the past which is widely discussed into a point where a complanation has been aroused.As far as I'm concert,I definitely object this kind of view.The following reasons and examples will justify my side.

To star with,the most vital reason is that modern life is more convenient than past life.It is true that we have a fast-pace's life in this century.We are hurry to finish our work everyday.But just because we are work so hard.We can totally enjoy the convenience.To be more specific,Bill Gates changed the world by introducing personal computer to every people.PE really make our life become better.For us,we can use computer to do some work and to communicate with people far away.It is really good for ours.It makes our life become easier.We can do a vast amount of things which people in the past can't do.

Furthermore,nowadays people's life is much colorful.We have so many choices in today's life.We can do what ever we want.From a long period of time,Hawaii attracts tourists from all over the world every year.The travelers enjoy themselves with the excellent scenery ,such as brilliant sunshine and soft sea wind.Through this way,we may feel comfortable and funny.The reason why we can have this perfect experience is that airplane can easily take us to every parts of the world.It gives us a opportunity to broaden our horizon and travel around this world.Comparing with past life,we do have so many entertainment now.It seems that the world become smaller and our life become more brilliant.

Moreover,a few people are convinced that people now are not satisfied with their lives.Because they suffer a lot of pressure in daily life.But I'm not believe it.For instance,an investigation carried out by Chinese Academic of Social Science last year revealed that more than eighty percent of people are happy with their life.Even though everyone have some troubles,but it doesn't meant that we are not satisfied with our lives.In fact,we have a better life.

It would therefore no be too great an exaggeration to draw to the conclusion that people in today's society is much happier than before.It is because in today's life we don't need to worried too much about food, medical care or shelter.So we can do everything we like and chase for our dream.

山姆大叔

In today's society,the world change so quickly.Obviously,it bring a lot of joy to modern people,also,some people feel tired about it.So,the issue about people now are less happy with their lives than people were in the past which is widely discussed into a point where a complanation has been aroused.As far as I'm concert,I definitely object this kind of view（把你的观点的具体观点说出来）.The following reasons and examples will justify my side.(注意三单啊姑娘)

To star with,the most vital reason is that modern life is more convenient than past life.It is true that we have a fast-pace's life in this century.We are hurry（着急做某事是in a hurry） to finish our work everyday.But just because we are work so hard.We can totally enjoy the convenience.To be more specific,Bill Gates changed the world by introducing personal computer to every people（people是天生的复数名词，每个人你就说everyone就行了）.PE（个人电脑写PC） really make our life become better.For us,we can use computer to do some work and to communicate with people far away.It is really good for ours.It makes our life become easier.We can do a vast amount of things which people in the past can't do.

Furthermore,nowadays people's life is much colorful.We have so many choices in today's life.We can do what ever we want.From a long period of time,Hawaii attracts tourists from all over the world every year.The travelers enjoy themselves with the excellent scenery ,such as brilliant sunshine and soft sea wind.Through this way,we may feel comfortable and funny.The reason why we can have this perfect experience is that airplane can easily take us to every parts of the world.It gives us a opportunity to broaden our horizon and travel around this world.Comparing with past life,we do have so many entertainment now.It seems that the world become smaller and our life become(三单) more brilliant.

Moreover,a few people are convinced that people now are not satisfied with their lives.Because they suffer a lot of pressure in daily life.But I'm not believe it怎么还是be动词+动词啊.For instance,an investigation carried out by Chinese Academic of Social Science last year revealed that more than eighty percent of people are happy with their life.Even though everyone have some troubles,but it doesn't meant that we are not satisfied with our lives.In fact,we have a better life.

It would therefore no be too great an exaggeration to draw to the conclusion that people in today's society is much happier than before.It is because in today's life we don't need to worried too much about food, medical care or shelter.So we can do everything we like and chase for our dream.

差不多还是22-23之间，细节上三单问题，拼写问题你要是都写对了，基本上就到25分左右了。加油啊！