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In today's society,different people have different views.The issue about teacher should not make their social or political views known to students in classroom is widely discuss into a point where contemplation has been arouse.As far as I'm concern,I definitely object and reckon it as narrow and distorted view.The following reasons and examples will justify mu side.


To begin with,the most vital reason is that teachers have more social experience than student.Obviously,teachers can convey this experience to their students.It is good for students to get much social experience through their teacher's talk.To be more specific,as we know ,Bill Gates is a successful businessman.But his son is works in agricultural institution.They work in totally different kinds of domain .But Gates still toll to his son a lot of social views,so that he can use it in his own career.


Furthermore,another reason is that students can broaden their horizon through their teacher's talking.Frankly speaking,the knowledge which we know form books was so limited.We do want to know our teachers view about some social news.You know Randy ?The well-known professor from America, gave his last lecture near the end of his life. In the lecture, he showed his attitude towards life and all the audience was encouraged by his life experiences. Millions of people across the world were concentrated on the lecture and his charisma and optimism became an inspiration for them. It is obvious we can broaden our horizon by listening what our teacher share.Using this way,we can learn more about the world.



Moreover,a few people are convinced that it is a terrible idea that expressing teachers' own view to their students.Because they may be influenced through this way.I think there is no need to worried about this.For instance,an investigation carried out by BBS last year revealed that more than eighty percent of students hold the view that they want to know teachers' social or political views.Because they can get more knowledge from it.No matter if the view is same as what we think about,we just want a chance to know that.


It would therefore not be too great an exaggeration to draw to the conclusion that it is useful to let students know the their social or political views.It can help students to know the world better or maybe just get a different kinds of idea.Both of them will bring more joy to students.

山姆大叔

总的来说，造句上有进步，错误也在减少，鼓励一下。时间够的话，可以打到24分左右了。


在选例子上，有点小问题。因为比尔盖茨其实不算是teacher，著名的教师的例子有很多，比如最近很火的Robin McLaurim Williams，他演的著名电影dead poet society，里头的教师就是share social views的典型。你可以去看一看。然后在国内著名的，比如袁腾飞，易中天，都行。挑例子的时候，贴切最重要。



In today's society,different people have different views.The issue about teacher should not make their social or political views known to students in classroom is widely discuss into a point where contemplation has been arouse.As far as I'm concern,I definitely object and reckon it as narrow and distorted view.The following reasons and examples will justify mu side.


To begin with,the most vital reason is that teachers have more social experience than student（这里要用复数表示泛指学生们）.Obviously,teachers can convey this experience to their students.It is good for students to get much social experience through their teacher's talk.To be more specific,as we know ,Bill Gates is a successful businessman.But his son is works（动词冲突） in agricultural institution.They work in totally different kinds of domain .But Gates still toll to his son a lot of social views,so that he can use it in his own career.（这句话前后半句的he指的不是同一个人，指代有错）


Furthermore,another reason is that students can broaden their horizon through their teacher's talking.Frankly speaking,the knowledge which we know form books was（这里没必要用过去时，用is就行了） so limited.We do want to know our teachers view about some social news.You know Randy ?The well-known professor from America, gave his last lecture near the end of his life. In the lecture, he showed his attitude towards life and all the audience was encouraged by his life experiences. Millions of people across the world were concentrated on the lecture and his charisma and optimism became an inspiration for them. It is obvious we can broaden our horizon by listening what our teacher share.Using this way,we can learn more about the world.



Moreover,a few people are convinced that it is a terrible idea that expressing teachers' own view to their students.Because they may be influenced through this way.I think there is no need to worried（worry） about this.For instance,an investigation carried out by BBS last year revealed that more than eighty percent of students hold the view that they want to know teachers' social or political views.Because they can get more knowledge from it.No matter if the view is same as what we think about,we just want a chance to know that.


It would therefore not be too great an exaggeration to draw to the conclusion that it is useful to let students know the their social or political views.It can help students to know the world better or maybe just get a different kinds of idea.Both of them will bring more joy to students.