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发表于 2014-7-23 16:27:30 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
It cannot be doubted that we have been told to tell the truth when we were little child.In modern society, people argue should we tell the truch all the time?If it is good to not telling truth sometimes.As far as i’m concern,it is better no to tell the truth at times.

In the first place,we need to protect others feelings.According to a recent survey by BBC,90% of docters would choose not to tell the truth to the severe paitent about thier health condition.Why so many doctors try to not telling the truth?Because it is good for the patient to build up their confident. Also,confront future with optimism.Maybe throutgh this way the patient in badly condition will recover soon. All the people try to protect others felling when something bad happen.We will hide the truth because we want others to be happy instead of feeling hurt from the truth.

Also,not telling truth is a way to protect ourselves.As we all know,all the companies have their own business secrets.Some information is so improtant to make or break the company.During the decades,Google developed rapidly.As a excellent company,it have not tell everything truly to the society.It is because the company have to protect itself from so many competition.The advanced technology and the finacial date are the secrets of the company.So the company wouldn’t tell the truth all the time or the benifit of this company may be damaged .For others company,it is the same.And as for me.I wouldn’t let others know my password of my credict card .I need to ensure that my money is secure.
But some prople insist that we need to tell truth all the time.

Although everyone want to be a honesy peole,but sometimes it is good to don’t konw the truth.Because some white lies are just for fun.As we all know,when we want to give a surprise to our friends to celebrite his brithday.We always choose to do this secretly.If we let the person know.It just like you know all the things in the present.It is so bored and destroy the fun. So i think sometimes not telling the truth is good .

As a conclusion,people shouldnot tell the truth instead of telling truth every time. In this modern time,we need to know do everything in a ritht way.So maybe sometimes don’t tell the truth is better for everyone.
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发表于 2014-7-23 16:37:06 | 只看该作者
It cannot be doubted that we have been told to tell the truth when we were little child(child不用写了,写了反而错了).In modern society, people argue should we tell the truch all the time?(argue后面是从句,从句都是陈述句,你可以这么写people argue whether we should tell the truth all the time)If it is good to not telling truth sometimes.As far as i’m concern,it is better no to tell the truth at times.

In the first place,we need to protect others(others') feelings.According to a recent survey by BBC,90% of docters would choose not to tell the truth to the severe paitent about thier health condition.Why (do) so many doctors try to not telling(这里你可以用avoid,避免了一直重复用not to tell) the truth?Because it is good for the patient to build up their confident(confidence). Also,(这里你不如和上一句连起来,写成 and )confront future with optimism.Maybe throutgh this way the patient in badly condition will recover soon. All the people try to protect others felling when something bad happen.We will hide the truth because we want others to be happy instead of feeling hurt from the truth.

Also,not telling truth is a way to protect ourselves.As we all know,all the companies have their own business secrets.Some information is so improtant to make or break the company.During the decades,Google developed rapidly.As a(an) excellent company,it have(has) not tell(told) everything truly to the society.It is because the company have to protect itself from so many competition.The advanced technology and the finacial date are the secrets of the company.So the company wouldn’t tell the truth all the time or the benifit of this company may be damaged .For others(other) company,it is the same.And as for me.I wouldn’t let others know my password of my credict card .I need to ensure that my money is secure.
But some prople insist that we need to tell truth all the time.(这一段是没写完吗?)

Although everyone want to be a honesy peole,but sometimes it is good to don’t konw the truth.Because some white lies are just for fun.As we all know,when we want to give a surprise to our friends to celebrite his brithday.We always choose to do this secretly.If we let the person know.It just like you know all the things in the present.It is so bored and destroy the fun. So i think sometimes not telling the truth is good .

As a conclusion,people shouldnot tell the truth instead of telling truth every time. In this modern time,we need to know do everything in a ritht way.So maybe sometimes don’t tell the truth is better for everyone.

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