刘琳涵托福独立写作6.21

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Truth is stressed vital significance even some people insist on telling the truth no matter which situation they meet.Contrary speaking,some others prefer to hide the truth in some special conditions.In my case,the latter one is much more suitable in daily life and benefits a lot.

Firstly, not telling the truth sometimes can avoid some restrictions.The development of science largely attribute to the overturn of those so-called truth. Flying in the sky like birds is a dream for people decades ago.Unlike most people who were trapped in the concept that human beings can never fly in the sky which was the truth at that time,Wrights brother succeeded in devising the plane which gets the people around the world closer than ever before.If they were limited in the idea that flying like bird is nothing more than a daydream,there would not exist plane,needless to say the jet or the spaceship.Always telling truth will limit people’s imagination which setts the  huge problem to current improvement of science and technology.

Secondly,not telling the truth can bring people much more hopes.It is the hope that is the fundamentality of the life.Without energies from hopes,there will not be any enthusiasm for individual to live,not mention the better life.Specially, when people are trapped in the desert ,there is no water left in the bottle.If they are told the truth ,obviously they will lose the hope and end up with dying in the desert.On the contrary,if the truth is concealed and they are convinced there still remains a little water.Chances are that they will keep the hope and finally be rescued by others.Sometimes the cold and cruel reality will defeat people while the beautiful lie brings hope to promote people to struggle for the success which is better than doing nothing but give up..

Some one may argue that not telling the truth will hurt people’s feelings.However, it is not the case.When the child tries his best to prepare a dinner for his parents.Even though the food is not tasteful, undoubtedly his parents will say the meal is the most delicious food they have ever eaten.Admittedly,this comment is not the truth.Nevertheless,under such situation,it is telling the truth that the food is too bland or too salty rather than telling a beautiful lie that hurt the child’s heart.Also, when the patient is badly ill and merely have several months of life,the crucial truth hurts more than the lie.Family might as well prevent the patient from the fear and anxiety so that he can enjoy the last time of his life.

Consequently,it is improper to insist on telling the truth whenever and wherever it is.The advancement of science and technology sometimes require the ignorance of truth.Also life will be more beautiful and warm with the decoration of some beautiful lies.

山姆大叔

Truth is stressed vital significance even some people insist on telling the truth no matter which（what） situation they meet.Contrary speaking,some others prefer to hide the truth in some special conditions.In my case,the latter one is much more suitable in daily life and benefits a lot.

Firstly, not telling the truth sometimes can avoid some restrictions(这里Chinglish了，最好用people can avoid some restriction by hiding the truth).The development of science largely attribute to the overturn of those so-called truth. Flying in the sky like birds is a dream for people decades ago（这里转折有点生硬，你好歹要加一个for example）.Unlike most people who were trapped in the concept that human beings can never fly in the sky.(这个句子到这里就可以结束了) which（It） was the truth at that time, （yet）Wrights brother succeeded in devising the plane which gets the people around the world closer than ever before.If they were limited in the idea that flying like bird is nothing more than a daydream,there would not exist plane,needless to say the jet or the spaceship（这里要用名词复数形式）.Always telling truth will limit people’s imagination which setts the  huge problem to current improvement of science and technology.

Secondly,not telling the truth can bring people much more hopes.It is the hope that is the fundamentality of the life.Without energies from hopes,there will not be any enthusiasm for individual to live,not （to）mention the better life.Specially（这里也是一个例子，你可以说for instance）, when people are trapped in the desert ,there is no water left in the bottle.If they are told the truth ,obviously they will lose the hope and end up with dying in the desert.On the contrary,if the truth is concealed and they are convinced there still remains a little water.Chances are that they will keep the hope and finally be rescued by others.Sometimes the cold and cruel reality will defeat people while the beautiful lie brings hope to promote people to struggle for the success which is better than doing nothing but give up..（这个例子不是特别有说服力，其实你可以举很多最近的例子，比如说，马航失事的事儿，的确有很多谣言，但也正是真相一直没有被发现，所以大家都还抱有希望。又比如像在医院，医生对于重病患者多少都会隐瞒病情，希望让病人保持乐观）

Some one may argue that not telling the truth will hurt people’s feelings.However, it is not the case.When（你看这里你写的不是一个完整的句子，违反了写作原则了） the child tries his best to prepare a dinner for his parents.Even though the food is not tasteful, undoubtedly his parents will say the meal is the most delicious food they have ever eaten.Admittedly,this comment is not the truth.Nevertheless,under such situation,it is telling the truth that the food is too bland or too salty rather than telling a beautiful lie that hurt the child’s heart.Also, when the patient is badly ill and merely have several months of life,the crucial truth hurts more than the lie.Family might as well prevent the patient from the fear and anxiety so that he can enjoy the last time of his life.（这一段事实上你没有在反方的角度想出一个有效的第三方论点，所以写起来很吃力。其实很简单，你可以说：有的人认为不说实话的人不诚实，而不诚实的人是不值得交往的。然后再说，他们说的不对，人们都会容忍white lies，只要是善意的谎言。记得，永远是在B到C的靠拢这一步，进行反驳。）

Consequently,it is improper to insist on telling the truth whenever and wherever it is.The advancement of science and technology sometimes require the ignorance of truth.Also life will be more beautiful and warm with the decoration of some beautiful lies.